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[Judging by the sounds coming from over the phone, Mr. Keneko seems to be throwing up. After about a few minutes, he hung up and called again sounding very tired but pleased. Here is the conversation]

I couldn't do it. I couldn't do it. I could not drink two bowls of my own cooking. Break's words really messed me up. At first, I had decided to try imagining that this was something else I was about to eat.  But that damn kid, he messed up my concentration and then Carmen joined in…so I scrapped that plan. I decided maybe if I just downed both the bowls quickly, I could win. Big mistake.

I drank one bowl quickly. I could feel the blood gushing down my throat. The chunks of meat brushing against my tongue…ugh. Sorry. I almost threw up in my mouth. I…sadly could not get to the other bowl. I felt sick. I got sick. As I raced to the trash can, I could hear Break and Carmen laugh as loud as they could. At least my two girls love me. Claira and Katsu came over and pulled back my hair as I expelled the stew. It was even worse coming back up.

Well. All is not lost. I don't know why…maybe seeing me this way struck something in Carmen, but she came up behind me, shooed the girls away and held back my hair.

"Alright...hah…you win. I'll leave you alone"

"You mean you are actually going to hold up your end of the deal and leave me alone?"

"Yes…as much as I hate it."

"…."

"AHAHAHAHA!"

"Ugh…shut up Break!"

"Katsu, you heard daddy! Shut up!"

"None of you are the boss of me except mom."

"Keep on laughing Break. It's not often we see a God throw up."

"Alright, alright. Enough laughter. I lost. Let's get it over with"

"…well. I guess I have to give you something for eating one bowl. Even though it came right back up"

"…What?"

She let go of my hair and started walking towards her room. "Meet me in my room and we will talk. We need to talk anyway and bring some tea. I feel queasy myself."

I…I don't know what to say? Carmen took pity on me? Again? I feel excited. What could she want to talk about? Although, when most women say, we need to talk, it's not good. Well, just in case, I sent the kids out the house and I am currently brewing tea. I hope this goes well.
Karasu lost...or did he? What does Carmen want to talk about?

Who knows!? I know. But I'm not telling it.
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:iconlilly-rulez:
Lilly-Rulez Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i knew he was gonna lose!! X3
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Danerboots Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Yep~~ Weak stomach!
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Lucky-Black-Cat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
asjlkdhafg this was so shooooooort. But you're posting a lot. <3 WOOO GO KARASU GET SOME
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Danerboots Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
It was so short...but it took me forever!!!!
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Lucky-Black-Cat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I hope your funk isn't coming back!
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:icondanerboots:
Danerboots Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Nope. Typing more right now. Don't feel like coloring. But some people like short entries.
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Lucky-Black-Cat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
True, true. Personally, I'd rather long entries where a lot of things happen every so often, but each to their own.
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Danerboots Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
True true. ^_^
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Lucky-Black-Cat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
But I also like big, thick books. So who knows!
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Danerboots Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Me too dude~
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